❶ 2009年浙江高考英语作文，求点评
第一句话有语法问题啊。。liyue and zhanghua who came from the class 2 of second year in our school 只是主语。没谓语啊。。应该把后面的and they 删了。。
第二段As a school report，应该是As a school reporter，还有， on their face.应该是 on their faces.
最后一段how to car about the old有一个单词错了。。应该是care about the old
我觉得可以得18分吧。。。30分的满分。。。