❶ 2009年浙江高考英語作文，求點評
第一句話有語法問題啊。。liyue and zhanghua who came from the class 2 of second year in our school 只是主語。沒謂語啊。。應該把後面的and they 刪了。。
第二段As a school report，應該是As a school reporter，還有， on their face.應該是 on their faces.
最後一段how to car about the old有一個單詞錯了。。應該是care about the old
我覺得可以得18分吧。。。30分的滿分。。。